I was entertained!
Great use of visual effects on the text and the still images. The music also set an appropriately urgent tone. The font was a bit difficult to read on some of the screens, and there were places where spell check would have helped. Overall though, great job. I'm sure this will go over really well. It would be cool if there were a bit more interactivity for the stand-alone presentation on this site. But, as it stands it gets the message across effectively.
You know, while it isn't much of a game, I think you actually have something really good going here. I like how you can use your gun not only to shoot, but also to move through the environment, and how you can interact with so many elements of the background. If you add some moving enemies, objectives, and multiple paths I think you'd have something awesome. Especially if you maintained the high level of background interactivity. For a first try flash, great job.
Cool, cool. mad props.
It's actually a nice tutorial and the interactive bit at the end is well done. This is a really nice companion to the bad inventions series and would be a great preloader or minigame in for a larger movie. Now that you've figured out how to do the drawing part you might want to kick it up a little bit by giving the user the ability vary line thickness and color and maybe even select multiple backgrounds to draw their sticks over. With the core script that you've got those shouldn't be difficult modifications to include, just a suggestion to extend the interactivity, it's neat as is.
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